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Great image especially seen on old farmlands, or abandoned by roadsides..Interesting art piece..Eileen
That REALLY worked Bjorn. I think one extra wird would dilute the atmosphere. Karumi is very interesting. Everything about this haiku is just right.
Karumi is such an interesting form. The image and association is so very well done.
I enjoyed this, Bjorn - it's a perfect image -- so very well written :)
Bravo Bjorn ... you brought the image home very nicely ...
A nice image I recall back home in the country.
Pared down to the bare bones. Well done you.
That's a good one. It paints such an immediate and vivid picture.
I think you did a great job on this "karumi" concept. Your haiku is a very strong karumi styled haiku ... well done.
An excellent picture you paint with rust and oil :)
...while most artists use acrylics!Under the Pine Tree
Oh wow! Fabulous image!
Great image especially seen on old farmlands, or abandoned by roadsides..Interesting art piece..
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That REALLY worked Bjorn. I think one extra wird would dilute the atmosphere. Karumi is very interesting. Everything about this haiku is just right.
ReplyDeleteKarumi is such an interesting form. The image and association is so very well done.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this, Bjorn - it's a perfect image -- so very well written :)
ReplyDeleteBravo Bjorn ... you brought the image home very nicely ...
ReplyDeleteA nice image I recall back home in the country.
ReplyDeletePared down to the bare bones. Well done you.
ReplyDeleteThat's a good one. It paints such an immediate and vivid picture.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job on this "karumi" concept. Your haiku is a very strong karumi styled haiku ... well done.
ReplyDeleteAn excellent picture you paint with rust and oil :)
ReplyDeleteAn excellent picture you paint with rust and oil :)
ReplyDelete...while most artists use acrylics!
DeleteUnder the Pine Tree
Oh wow! Fabulous image!
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