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That cae to me slowly, with a couple of possible meanings - and this is where a haiku's strength lies, in the slow realisation. Well done.
Very, very interesting. One to read several times - mull over - and I like that very much :)
The last line throws up multiple lines of thought! Nice!
Ah my très touchant...empty chest, filled with hollow heart.
Sometimes all the emotions are drained out of the heart and what all that's left is the footprint of memories........................
Interesting read!
It sounds to me as though the chest is a human, empty of emotions...A Few White Blossoms
A beautiful response, very fragile scene
So much to imagine!
That cae to me slowly, with a couple of possible meanings - and this is where a haiku's strength lies, in the slow realisation. Well done.
ReplyDeleteVery, very interesting. One to read several times - mull over - and I like that very much :)
ReplyDeleteThe last line throws up multiple lines of thought! Nice!
ReplyDeleteAh my très touchant...empty chest, filled with hollow heart.
ReplyDeleteSometimes all the emotions are drained out of the heart and what all that's left is the footprint of memories........................
ReplyDeleteInteresting read!
ReplyDeleteIt sounds to me as though the chest is a human, empty of emotions...
ReplyDeleteA Few White Blossoms
A beautiful response, very fragile scene
ReplyDeleteSo much to imagine!
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