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You have this style down pat. volumes spoken in few words. Great job.
Throws up multiple images! Excellent.
One never thinks of solitary locusts - interesting.
I can see the locust on its own, waiting... nice haiku :)
The paradox is obvious as locusts are never alone!Hank
A loner locust! Ha!Butterfly Pauses
Such deep underlying meaning here, like looking at an abstract painting; depending where you are in your life, it tells a different story.
Your brevity is so refreshing!
Who is the "her," I wonder?Three Dead Butterflies
Ah. that's where we leave a little ambiguity...
Nice haiku Björn ... it has something hidden in its deeper layers .... locusts are never alone and if they are ... that must be a lonely life.
You have this style down pat. volumes spoken in few words. Great job.
ReplyDeleteThrows up multiple images! Excellent.
ReplyDeleteOne never thinks of solitary locusts - interesting.
ReplyDeleteOne never thinks of solitary locusts - interesting.
ReplyDeleteI can see the locust on its own, waiting... nice haiku :)
ReplyDeleteThe paradox is obvious as locusts are never alone!
ReplyDeleteHank
A loner locust! Ha!
ReplyDeleteButterfly Pauses
Such deep underlying meaning here, like looking at an abstract painting; depending where you are in your life, it tells a different story.
ReplyDeleteYour brevity is so refreshing!
ReplyDeleteWho is the "her," I wonder?
ReplyDeleteThree Dead Butterflies
Ah. that's where we leave a little ambiguity...
DeleteNice haiku Björn ... it has something hidden in its deeper layers .... locusts are never alone and if they are ... that must be a lonely life.
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