Monday, May 25, 2015

Carpe Diem Haiku - strawmats

old strawmats
cover wet concrete 
widow's secret

Fore Carpe Diem Haiku

10 comments:

  1. Ouch! This is awesome. :) Very Poe-esque.

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  2. Bjorn! You composed a thriller in a haiku! I agree it is Poe-esque but alo highly original and so very well done. I laughed at the sheer nerve of it, but in truth it is a whole new genre opened up, but a very difficult one to get right like you did there. Highly entertaining and of course it fits the prompt 'puzzle' notion.

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  3. I agree with Hamish. Enjoyed this.

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  4. Oof! Wow --- ! What more can I say? :D

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  5. Yipes ... shades of lace and arsenic! Very cool!

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  6. Wow! such an Edgar Allen Poe feel here.

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  7. There are worse places to be buried, I suppose! ;)

    Unwrapping the Straw Mat

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  8. Ha! A Scandi noir murder mystery in three lines - great!

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  9. Oh Wow!!! So cool!! Really enjoyed this take!

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