Thursday, May 14, 2015

Carpe Diem Haiku - chill of night

those fireflies
mirrored in the pond -
the chill of night

Linked to Carpe Diem

7 comments:

  1. Fireflies are so lovely :)

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  2. Painting such an appealing image.

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  3. Very nicely done --- I can feel it; see it :)

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  4. Nice haiku indeed - wondering why you made the night chilled, interesting..

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  5. Perfect and very close to what I'd expect to read if Basho had written it! Bravo.

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  6. :) may be the light for mfireflies will make it warm!

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