Actually it was I believed and felt from Basho's haiku. The wandering crow is a beggar.. and somehow I did not want to use a plum tree, but use the double meaning of the flower.
A great response Björn it's a different "way" you took in this prompt ... I wasn't aware of the meaning of a wandering crow .... but you turned that meaning in a great way with this gorgeous haiku.
EXTREMELY touching. You searched somewhere inside and found that. Well done.
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DeleteWow!! Amazing!!
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ReplyDeleteI love the power is just a few words.
ReplyDeletePowerful and poignant.
ReplyDeleteWhat a vivid scene! An old mattress transformed!
ReplyDeleteThe quality of this haiku is an inspiration. Well done, Bjorn.
ReplyDeleteThis is touching and full of meaning.
ReplyDeleteA great response Björn it's a different "way" you took in this prompt ... I wasn't aware of the meaning of a wandering crow .... but you turned that meaning in a great way with this gorgeous haiku.
ReplyDeletevery heart touching, people go but they never leave completely.................
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