Hunger is less for the pea- nut butter sandwich jammed between her lipsticked lips then sips of sense- less passion after. Linked to Open Platform at toads
Whew. That is yummy. I love that sneaky little "sense after" you stacked ... because we really don't worry about whether or not our passion makes sense, until after.
The line break after "pea" makes me think of The Princess and the Pea ... giving her something to do when she can't sleep, maybe. :)
I even see "of sensei-less passion" :) ... So maybe fiery martial arts, without a teacher.
Then at the end, I see "say less passion, after" ... Like, if you break up with someone and then say it wasn't really that hot anyway (even though it was).
Peanut butter sandwiches quench hunger pangs, that's all they do for me. Lucky lady here. I eat several soda cracker and peanut putter treats daily, taking them with medication. ..
This made me hungry as peanut butter and jelly sandwiches are one of my favorite things! I hope your eye is much better and the gas bubble is gone. Maybe instead of "sips" "bites?" Highly emotional. Lol!
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ReplyDeleteOne can hunger for a lot of things.
ReplyDeleteGorgeously written, Bjorn!❤️
ReplyDeleteWhew. That is yummy. I love that sneaky little "sense after" you stacked ... because we really don't worry about whether or not our passion makes sense, until after.
ReplyDeleteThe line break after "pea" makes me think of The Princess and the Pea ... giving her something to do when she can't sleep, maybe. :)
I wrote this so to have a lot of fun actually...
DeleteYour stacking is really clever.
ReplyDelete"between 'sticked' lips"
I even see "of sensei-less passion" :) ... So maybe fiery martial arts, without a teacher.
Then at the end, I see "say less passion, after" ... Like, if you break up with someone and then say it wasn't really that hot anyway (even though it was).
Nice Bjorn. Different feel for you.
ReplyDeleteI can't stop thinking of peanut butter between really red lips... and fetishes. Very strong imagery, Bjorn.
ReplyDeleteOne has to remember the tittle on this
ReplyDeleteHunger certainly cannot be satisfied with food alone. There are other outlets for its fulfillment!
ReplyDeleteHank
valid ..both!!!
ReplyDeleteEconomical yet highly evocative.
ReplyDeletePeanut butter sandwiches quench hunger pangs, that's all they do for me. Lucky lady here. I eat several soda cracker and peanut putter treats daily, taking them with medication.
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This made me hungry as peanut butter and jelly sandwiches are one of my favorite things! I hope your eye is much better and the gas bubble is gone. Maybe instead of "sips" "bites?" Highly emotional. Lol!
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