Wednesday, August 12, 2015

Choka - Thunderstom

rippled cumulus
the sky's an anguished brow  
sentences afloat
raindrops falling from her lips
as arbor arms waves
in sudden gust of syllables
the flowers shudder
for yet unopened letter
thunderbolt to strike
a raven seeks her shelter

softness of your hand
turned granite from what's done
kisses of deceit
your skirt was raised by a wind
by his hands of thunderstorms

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6 comments:

  1. So good to see you at Carpe Diem again, Bjorn!
    The hanka is expecially strong ....especially the softness turned to granite.

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  2. Beautifully done, Bjorn.

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  3. lots of emotion in this beautiful verse

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  4. I am glad to see you here again my friend and with your new found skill of writng longer poems you really have surprized me. What a wonderful choka ... very well done.

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  5. Well done with wonderful imagery.

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