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I like this one. I think of a breezy day in the forest here and an easy conversation.
Ah, this is lovely - beautiful use of sound
Nice juxtaposition Bjorn Much love...
The onomatopoeia works so well --- !
A beauty Björn ... a nice and smoothly connecting to the techniques haiku ... thanks for sharing.
Love the contrast and imagery!
Good to see you back, if only briefly. (I understand you are writing longer pieces these days.) This is an exquisite haiku. It just draws me in, making me want to sit among the blackbirds and chat with them!Magical Key
i like the sound of alliteration, especially "soft syllables" :)
You've painted a beautiful picture here, using only a few words as brushstrokes...
Amazed at the way you said so much iinin so few words. Absolutely delightful.
I like this. Simple. Beautiful. I fear I know no form, just write and it makes it's own form.Thanks for coming by...wish the world would wake up.Have a great week.
I love Haiku, and especially liked yours. Beautiful!
very nice juxtaposition...your haiku is truly beautiful..."syllable" rolls off the tongue so nicely.
This is wonderful, the contrast between the soft words and the wind and the busy blackbirds. Loved it.
I like this one. I think of a breezy day in the forest here and an easy conversation.
ReplyDeleteAh, this is lovely - beautiful use of sound
ReplyDeleteNice juxtaposition Bjorn
ReplyDeleteMuch love...
The onomatopoeia works so well --- !
ReplyDeleteA beauty Björn ... a nice and smoothly connecting to the techniques haiku ... thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteLove the contrast and imagery!
ReplyDeleteGood to see you back, if only briefly. (I understand you are writing longer pieces these days.) This is an exquisite haiku. It just draws me in, making me want to sit among the blackbirds and chat with them!
ReplyDeleteMagical Key
i like the sound of alliteration, especially "soft syllables" :)
ReplyDeleteYou've painted a beautiful picture here, using only a few words as brushstrokes...
ReplyDeleteAmazed at the way you said so much iinin so few words. Absolutely delightful.
ReplyDeleteI like this. Simple. Beautiful. I fear I know no form, just write and it makes it's own form.
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming by...wish the world would wake up.
Have a great week.
I love Haiku, and especially liked yours. Beautiful!
ReplyDeletevery nice juxtaposition...your haiku is truly beautiful..."syllable" rolls off the tongue so nicely.
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful, the contrast between the soft words and the wind and the busy blackbirds. Loved it.
ReplyDelete