I’m both driftwood and
an acorn.
disappointment
and potential.
If only I could
chlorophyll,
I might catch the sky,
stretch and oak myself.
Instead I willow
bending way
too
low
not knowing how
to grow.
For Magaly's prompt at toads
I do so love the wood references. Oak, willow and driftwood all lend a different feel.
ReplyDeleteI'm enchanted by your use of chlorophyll, oak and willow as verbs. The movement feels natural, and real...
ReplyDeleteEnchanting fable of one who cannot see itself
ReplyDeleteI so enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteThis is outstanding Bjorn!
ReplyDeleteIf only I could chlorophyll! That is ingenious.
ReplyDeleteThe opening sentence is interesting --- a bit of philosophy to ponder.
ReplyDeleteI reiterate this is outstanding
ReplyDeleteMuch love...
As you know, Bjorn, I love anything to do with trees and wordplay!
ReplyDeleteInteresting blend and referencing of nature. We grow, and we learn, and vice versa. Greetings to you.
ReplyDeleteSo charming. Really lovely. Thanks. k.
ReplyDeleteToo good Bjorn!!
ReplyDeleteOh my, the imagery flows back and forth so naturally in this verse. A very charming piece.
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loved the use of chlorophyll, oak and willow...few words and lots of depth...stunning!
ReplyDeleteWhat an exceptional poem - the balance is perfect. I love every line of it.
ReplyDeletecool. i really like this, Bjorn ~
ReplyDeleteOutstanding. I love it.
ReplyDeletewillows and oaks, driftwood and acorns... I love them all! I think it is the balance of all of them - after all, who wants to be perfect? :)
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