tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6530863757835392744.post8641673128344563678..comments2023-05-11T09:17:14.898+02:00Comments on Poetry: Close to midnightbrudberghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6530863757835392744.post-79555075493648067652017-05-23T21:24:27.771+02:002017-05-23T21:24:27.771+02:00My goodness this is such a captivating write, Bjor...My goodness this is such a captivating write, Bjorn!❤️Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6530863757835392744.post-26442276231220975832017-05-23T19:23:52.696+02:002017-05-23T19:23:52.696+02:00...crawl of claws on gravel... wonderful sound wo......crawl of claws on gravel... wonderful sound words here.Sarah Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06548593069470592148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6530863757835392744.post-53276629061245131142017-05-23T18:50:09.062+02:002017-05-23T18:50:09.062+02:00My affinity for paranormal novels takes over here ...My affinity for paranormal novels takes over here and I imagine all kinds of bloodthirsty events.<br />Love the sound of the words. As others have said "crawl of claws on gravel" scores.Sascha Darlingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10341908377333394733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6530863757835392744.post-68865640737385564152017-05-23T16:23:09.659+02:002017-05-23T16:23:09.659+02:00Whew. Man, I can HEAR this:
"crawl of claws
...Whew. Man, I can HEAR this: <br />"crawl of claws<br />on gravel" De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6530863757835392744.post-76765263809203898932017-05-23T14:44:02.238+02:002017-05-23T14:44:02.238+02:00Oh my gosh! Okay --- you've definitely gone t...Oh my gosh! Okay --- you've definitely gone to the dark side with this one! It strikes me after reading comments on my Final Scene...that when I wrote Vamp sounds of decay....folks may have seen the double entendre within the word "vamp" and thought I meant a vampire....which your words definitely invoke! When actually I meant as in a movie direction: vamp up the sounds...make them louder :) Ah well....you've definitely given us a thriller here with a vampire twisted in the sheets!!! lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6530863757835392744.post-37464083747718520932017-05-23T14:11:45.190+02:002017-05-23T14:11:45.190+02:00Brilliant werewolf Quadrille, Bjorn. I love the li...Brilliant werewolf Quadrille, Bjorn. I love the lines:<br />'sound of nought<br />but crawl of claws'<br />'and moonbeamed<br />from my throat <br /> erupt <br /><br />howls for blood'.<br />Nice twist - reminds me of Thriller!Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6530863757835392744.post-68788812402410660172017-05-23T03:50:05.560+02:002017-05-23T03:50:05.560+02:00I felt a couple of different things going on here,...I felt a couple of different things going on here, but mostly a mysterious transformation. There is the implication that there is more than one at play here ;)<br /><br />heartbeats racing<br /> twisted bedsheets<br />wet with sweat<br /> when…<br />suddenly <br /> a clock<br />strikes twelveTruedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6530863757835392744.post-70828757915849478842017-05-23T03:04:37.947+02:002017-05-23T03:04:37.947+02:00I don't know why, but the werewolf sounds like...I don't know why, but the werewolf sounds like he's coming in for the night. Waltermarkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619428258264938946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6530863757835392744.post-52409345239660833732017-05-23T03:00:06.740+02:002017-05-23T03:00:06.740+02:00Dramatic play of bloody howls Bjorn ~ Crawl of cl...Dramatic play of bloody howls Bjorn ~ Crawl of claws is creepy ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6530863757835392744.post-84334520103120063362017-05-23T01:35:37.886+02:002017-05-23T01:35:37.886+02:00So much for the thought that, "tender is the ...So much for the thought that, "tender is the night." Your poem dispels that nicely.Charleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08662221501459533188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6530863757835392744.post-36531270432484163752017-05-23T00:06:46.282+02:002017-05-23T00:06:46.282+02:00Give me a big smile, this one did. Give me a big smile, this one did. Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6530863757835392744.post-14106922841389487402017-05-22T23:47:10.228+02:002017-05-22T23:47:10.228+02:00brilliant.....you got your teeth into this prompt ...brilliant.....you got your teeth into this prompt ;)Paul John Dearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08976172444697072142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6530863757835392744.post-59612110689904013472017-05-22T22:55:48.999+02:002017-05-22T22:55:48.999+02:00"sound of nought
but crawl of claws" ......"sound of nought<br />but crawl of claws" ... This is my favorite part.<br /><br />I also like how the spacing suggests that the "clock" might represent someone who is striking 12 people.<br /><br />I also like these:<br /><br />"twisted bedsheets<br />wet with sweat"<br /><br />"moonbeamed<br />from my throat" ... Also how the word-stacking makes it sound like you're vomiting blood.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6530863757835392744.post-19659104963483375782017-05-22T22:25:40.366+02:002017-05-22T22:25:40.366+02:00So much sound in this that plays together to creat...So much sound in this that plays together to create a dark, chilling fantasy. Nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com